求英语作文改错
英语作文改错 -
Dear MISS Luo，Last Summer holiday, I went to Nanning with my parents and whole of my brother's families.Nanning was called “The Green City”,it’s very so beautiful. There were lots of trees and grass and many big buildings, too. We reached Nanning at 18:30, we went 到此结束了？。
1. Halloween, I would like to dress up as a black thing 修改：On Hallowmas, I would like to be dressed up as a black figure.(dress 是及物动词，I是被装扮的对象，所以要改为被动语态；“东西”指的是生命物的外形，而不是无生命的thing)。2. the thing about wanted a black pers是什么。
Dear MISS Luo，Last Summer holiday, I went to Nanning with my parents and whole of my brother's families.Nanning was called “The Green City”,it’s very so beautiful. There were lots of trees and grass and many big buildings, too. We reached Nanning at 18:30, we went 到此结束了？。
1. Halloween, I would like to dress up as a black thing 修改：On Hallowmas, I would like to be dressed up as a black figure.(dress 是及物动词，I是被装扮的对象，所以要改为被动语态；“东西”指的是生命物的外形，而不是无生命的thing)。2. the thing about wanted a black pers是什么。
I destroyed each of my toy(改为toys). I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it(改为them). For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which(改等我继续说。
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我自己写的英语作文,请专家改错,(分别指出为什么错了) -
1) i with my sister went to jiangxin island last weekend. 句首字母要大写，一般表示两个人一起的时候不用with，而且要把“I”放后面，应该改为：My sister and I went to jiangxin island last weekend. 或者改成：I went to Jiangxin Island with my sister last weekend.2) it's sunny 希望你能满意。
I study chinese very well应该为I am good at Chinese或I do well in Chinese I study English very well同上Our class is from half past seven a.m.to five o'clock p.m应改为Our classes begin from half past seven a.m.to five o`clock p.m.Yours,Hunt应放在末尾所以应该是Dea是什么。
求英语作文改错,谢谢哈! -
usually harm (harm - harmful)to people`s eye(eye - eyes).Some people may stay(加上at) one place for a long time.All kinds of these things we can meet（all kinds of these things放在这）in our life.So ,we need have good habits to relax ourself(ourself - ourselves)等我继续说。.
students in our class. They have different choices to go school. Thirty students go to school by bike . It takes them about 10~15 minutes to get to school。ways > choices 因为way 在这里当道路讲，即他们有不同的路去学校，改为choices，意为可选择的方式。其它都是一般改正希望你能满意。
英语作文改错 -
Now that---Nowadays use---are using information---message 去掉pictures后面的words thinks---think 去掉of so teacher do---so do teacher 结尾：In my opinion, students should balance the time between using wechat and study.
Friend-friends 第二行去掉cat前面的the nameing -named can't-couldn't has-had beautifull is-was care后加of 去掉been because-so