急急!请帮忙检查是否有语病谢谢!
急急急,麻烦各位帮我看看这篇作文有什么语病吗,谢谢 -
there were many students standing in front of the school gate because the school was closed . My friend and i decided to have a picnic in a park and we did not go home until my
有一个句子有语病：I'm going to there to play.there是副词，前面不应该有to.最地道的说法是201104yangyang所说的那一段，我原文照抄如下：go的将来时一般用现在进行时表示将来。所以以上句子很不地道。Where are you going this holiday？（I'm going ）to the park .When are you going there希望你能满意。
there were many students standing in front of the school gate because the school was closed . My friend and i decided to have a picnic in a park and we did not go home until my
有一个句子有语病：I'm going to there to play.there是副词，前面不应该有to.最地道的说法是201104yangyang所说的那一段，我原文照抄如下：go的将来时一般用现在进行时表示将来。所以以上句子很不地道。Where are you going this holiday？（I'm going ）to the park .When are you going there希望你能满意。
很好，没有语法错误，我已经仔细检查过了，
好象没有，以我浅薄的知识来看，
帮忙看下语法有没有错误!谢谢 急用 -
Time passes【去掉away更好】like a migratory bird flying south. The only difference is that it won't come back. Suddenly, I feel like an innocent child entering 【去掉into】school for the first time, but when I turned away from the memory, I realized it【had】been a year 等会说。
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语文高手请赐教,急!谢谢!修改病句,是否句意明确,帮忙指出错在哪里_百度...
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“通过”或“使”去掉一个，