急急!请帮忙检查是否有语病谢谢!
急急急,麻烦各位帮我看看这篇作文有什么语病吗,谢谢?？
there were many students standing in front of the school gate because the school was closed . My friend and i decided to have a picnic in a park and we did not go home until my
有一个句子有语病🐗🌦-🌱🐽：I'm going to there to play.there是副词🦗_🦒，前面不应该有to.最地道的说法是201104yangyang所说的那一段🐿_😫，我原文照抄如下😛-🤧🤮：go的将来时一般用现在进行时表示将来🐞*_|🌖😙。所以以上句子很不地道😢🏏|——🤩。Where are you going this holiday？（I'm going ）to the park .When are you going there有帮助请点赞☁️_🐬。
there were many students standing in front of the school gate because the school was closed . My friend and i decided to have a picnic in a park and we did not go home until my
有一个句子有语病🐗🌦-🌱🐽：I'm going to there to play.there是副词🦗_🦒，前面不应该有to.最地道的说法是201104yangyang所说的那一段🐿_😫，我原文照抄如下😛-🤧🤮：go的将来时一般用现在进行时表示将来🐞*_|🌖😙。所以以上句子很不地道😢🏏|——🤩。Where are you going this holiday？（I'm going ）to the park .When are you going there有帮助请点赞☁️_🐬。
很好🌻🕸_👹🐣，没有语法错误👽*——🤗☁️，我已经仔细检查过了🦀🥉|——🐕，
好象没有🐸🤗_-*🐔，以我浅薄的知识来看🥍🌏——-🐺，
帮忙看下语法有没有错误!谢谢 急用?？
Time passes【去掉away更好】like a migratory bird flying south. The only difference is that it won't come back. Suddenly, I feel like an innocent child entering 【去掉into】school for the first time, but when I turned away from the memory, I realized it【had】been a year 等会说🦕——🤠🐺。
我觉得你给的这三句话都有问题🙁|🌼🐹。A的问题是 研制新产品可以 但是新技术应该是开发新技术吧这个绝对的不搭配🙃_-🃏。B 那个价值和财富这样话等号是有点问题的☘️__🦈🐜，财富主要是经济方面的价值可是有文化的价值和经济的价值C主要原因 和 什么什么的结果重复了🐾🦚_*！所以🦧🦝|_🎗，我认为这里的每句话都有问题🌨-🦘*，..
语文高手请赐教,急!谢谢!修改病句,是否句意明确,帮忙指出错在哪里_百度...
4 .这篇文章其中分析了形势🤒|_🦔🐙，辩证地回答了在大开放🐷🎮——🎄🐣、大交往☄️——_⚡️、大融合的世界里🤮*|😂🐔，我们迫切需要一种全新的观念来协调各种关系🤪🕸|😺🐵。【搭配不当☁️🐥|-😦😖，“回答”改为“指出”】5 .由于世界性水危机😑_|😉，地表水和地下水都遭到了不同程度的污染🐺🥉_🎋🦒，水质日益恶化🌨*|-🐤*，于是人们把目光投向地层深处🐨_🪡，千方百计地寻找没有污染的矿泉水到此结束了？🐩_🛷。
1🧵🐏_*❄🎄，老师不仅激发了学生倾诉的欲望🍃🪡-_😘😭，而且明白怎样去描述🎎😚_-🌹。老师不仅激发了学生倾诉的欲望🎉——_🎆🐕🦺，而且还让学生明白了应该怎样去倾述🐓|_🐿🎈。2🐷🦈——😿，我们通过三种途径动员学生对新诗的热情🦉🦟-_🐘。我们通过三种途径来动员学生学新诗的热情🎋🎐_🐉😫。3😠🐔-😡，各省的诗歌鉴赏题都不约而同地选择了更显性🐒🏒|🥇🤗、更直接的提出考查的知识点🛷_🐈。各省的诗歌鉴赏题等我继续说🐼-|*。
麻烦大家帮忙检查并修改语病,谢谢大家 ️,十万火急!!?？
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“通过”或“使”去掉一个🏓_|💐🐈，